上海AEIS考试培训总结AEIS写作要点

　　备考新加坡AEIS考试一定要充分准备，科学进行AEIS考试线上培训才能顺利通过考试哦。掌握一些扩展知识，对于提高2017AEIS考试成绩的作用也是不言而喻的。记叙文主要是用于说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果，即我们通常所说的五个“W”(what, who, when, where, why)和一个“H”(how)，用于说明、佐证主题。由于字数和时间限制，AEIS考试科目英语读写任务里面的记叙文要减少过多的细节描写，突出中心，尤其是人物情绪变化，呼应文章主题。

　　【30词概括】串联要素法

　　当然, 不一定每篇记叙文都包含这六个要素,其中，有两个要素是最重要的：

　　(1) 谁做了什么?( What was done by someone?)

　　(2) 结果如何?( what was the result?)

　　(3)　如果是夹叙夹议的文章,还要加上这个故事给人们的启示或教育。

　　【叙事必备句型】

　　1. Reading this story brought back my memory about what happened in my primary school.

　　2. I was about to push the door when a girl came in, crashing into each other. (增强画面感)

　　3. Last night I was busy preparing for my test when I heard a loud noise.

　　4. It was snowing/ raining heavily on Monday morning. (渲染气氛)

　　5. The sun was shining and the birds were singing.

　　6. No sooner had I left than the bus arrived. (高级句式)

　　7. Tired as we were, we still felt quite happy for what we were doing.

　　8. Deeply moved by what she did, we tired our best to perform better.

　　9. It is patience that plays an important part in our study and work. (回归主题)

　　10. I learn a lesson from the experience that honesty always comes first.

　　11. Only when I heard her words did I realize the importance of patience.Only when.... am I aware of the significance of

　　实例练习：写一个班里同学默默为班级做贡献的事例，其中包括:

　　1、他/她的事迹及其对同学的影响;

　　2、你的评价。(80-100字) 我想起了我班里的一位同学，名为李越。她最近被评为班上的“每周之星”。上周六下午，她为班级选购歌咏比赛服装。她仔细挑选，最终帮我们找到合适的队服。我们都很感激她。另外，我们班拿到了比赛第一名!我们都认为是李越的热心肠帮我们赢得了比赛。

　　范例对比：

　　例一：

　　After reading the passage, I think of one classmate whose name is Li Yue. She was awarde the “Star Student of the Week” in our class. Last Saturday afternoon, she went to buy the clothing for our singing contest. She picked carefully and finally she found the suitable clothes for us, which made us thankful. In addition, we won the first prize in the competition. We thought her warm heart helped us win the contest so we all appreciate her. But she said, “It is my duty and I’m willing to help you.”

　　例二：

　　After reading the passage, I can’t help thinking of one of my classmates, Li Yue. She was awarded the title of “Star Student of the Week” for what she had done for our class Last Saturday afternoon, she went downtown and searched from one store to another, looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest. While the rest of us were enjoyin our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting, in spite of tiredness and the hot weather. Finally, she found the right clothes for all of us. Deeply moved by her efforts, we did our utmost in the competition and won the first prize. We owed our success to Li Yue’s warm-heart, thinking it was her efforts that led us to success! She deserved high praise!

　　优美记叙文段赏析以你自己或他人的经历说明诚实给人带来的好处

　　Once I saw a middle-aged woman and her elderly mother crossing the road. As they were walking the older woman’s purse fell from her bag but she didn’t notice. I picked up the purse and returned it to them. I didn’t wait for any praise or reward because the smile and surprise on their faces was enough.

　　It reminds me of the similar experience that happened to a successful business man. At th beginning of his career, he was only a college student and had no much supported money

　　He earned his life by selling deep-fired dough sticks (油条).

　　Although this brought him little income, he insisted being honest and using the healthier material which will cost more to make the fired dough sticks. Because of his honesty, more and more customers learned about him and his business had become more and more successful.

　　It reminds me of a piece of news. It was reported about a man who operates a lottery shop. One day, his customer called him and asked him to help to buy a lottery ticket. Finally, this lottery ticket won the biggest prize, but the owner didn't know the result. People all thought that the man would take it secretly. But he didn't do that. He called the customer to take the lottery money back. Since then, his business has been improving for his honesty.

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